Initial impressions: Great detail on locations and what is happening
limited options, so replaying from start would be quick, but not a lot of paths to follow.
Didn't notice the save option until I got stuck on a page, after selecting the option to use the mind reading item, which I didn't have. :) It just says 'Sorry, you do not have this item. Please go back to the previous passage and choose your option again.' I couldn't see how you go back and choose another option.
I also feel like this is pointless, so if you don't have an item the option shouldn't appear.
For me, the fixed-width font is much too large for the small window. Using the Web browser's default sans-serif font might be more appropriate (i.e. don't specify a font at all, which would cause the use of the default font.) I had to stop reading after the 3rd passage.
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Initial impressions:
Great detail on locations and what is happening
limited options, so replaying from start would be quick, but not a lot of paths to follow.
Didn't notice the save option until I got stuck on a page, after selecting the option to use the mind reading item, which I didn't have. :)
It just says 'Sorry, you do not have this item. Please go back to the previous passage and choose your option again.'
I couldn't see how you go back and choose another option.
I also feel like this is pointless, so if you don't have an item the option shouldn't appear.
Hope that helps :)
Thanks for this valuable feedback Shadolin, the back button has been enabled for these passages now, so could you please test again. thx!
For me, the fixed-width font is much too large for the small window. Using the Web browser's default sans-serif font might be more appropriate (i.e. don't specify a font at all, which would cause the use of the default font.) I had to stop reading after the 3rd passage.
Thanks for pointing this out, seldenb.
I initially used that font to attempt to replicate the old-style adventure games, but I take your point on readability.
To address your comment, I've changed the body text to a more legible font now, such as sans-serif.
I would greatly appreciate your further feedback on the game if you wouldn't mind playing again with the new font.
Cheers.